I thought I’d share the start of a new
tale. Would love some feedback.
“Spread
your legs.”
Evie
shuddered at the forcefulness of his voice and did as he asked.
As
his gaze raked over her and lingered there, between her legs, she held her
breath. It felt as if he was touching
her.
He
licked his lips and she swallowed the lump in her throat.
“Wider.”
Her
gaze met his and it scorched her to the core.
His blue eyes were dark with desire.
His look was predatory.
She
hesitated, and he stood and moved closer.
She spread her legs as wide as she possibly could.
His
lips turned up in a smile and her heart fluttered.
When
he took another step toward her, she felt the pulsating in her veins.
He
knelt before her and his hands slid up her thighs, his fingers so close to her hot,
wanting sex.

yes , very nice...
ReplyDeletei lovet ;)
greetings from Portugal :)
ajB
Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteWow, this scene is definitely hot! Can't wait for the whole story :)
ReplyDeleteI aim to please :)
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